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Place to come if you're a poet and know it!

Discussion in 'Creative Corner' started by Wensley, May 8, 2013.

  1. Wensley
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    So! As you've probably seen from the title I want to dedicate this thread to *Drum roll* poetry! I myself am a poet and also have written many poem in my time. If you have any poems that are just laying around or need to be heard and rated, post them here!
     
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    Pics or GTFO!

    by that, I mean, I wanna see yo' poems :)


    Here's a few of mine:





     
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    Hmm, here are some work from old times (all done as an assignment in school):


     
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    Roses are red,violets are blue
    I eat glue and its my fuel.
    Stace is a tart and i like to fart.
     
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    This is poetry,
    From the soul,
    From the heart,
    From my bowl,
    Of cereal that I eat,
    And muster the strength,
    To lift my spoon,
    And eat as I repent,
    I explore the open,
    Void of my soul,
    And I ask myself,
    Why you mad bro,
    For a rhyme is so simple,
    A rhyme is so true,
    But just remember,
    I hate you.
     
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    As the monster crawls and bends it's unbreakable cage
    I start to feel its everlasting rage
    Fueling my movements, controlling my speech
    Breaking my friendships to the point where
    My whole emotions about everything, are breached


    Even as I end this poem I feel it tear
    But to what limits will it go?
    This life isn't fair.


    P.S Dont exactly what type of format this is, just my own little freestyle.
     
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    I'm seeing you everywhere and I don't know why
    I've forever put you out of my head and wished you good bye.
    I've seen you so many times i've lost track.
    But as I see you I think of the unforgettable moments I wish I could take back.
    But you're gone, dead, away from this living hell
    But when I can't take my rumbling emotions, who do I tell?
    As my heart crumbles and my soul begins to disintegrate
    I know that living without you is my endless and hopeless fate.

     
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    WOO! Good stuff! :)
     
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    wens, are you sure that you are not a poet?
     
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    Newp, I rhyme as bad as Argne. :)
     
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    haha, lol... :p
     
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    Ze cat says moo in the loo
    I'm cool and you are a fool
    So meet me at noon and we'll see who's good.
     
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    At noon we shall meet and in 2 minutes you shall fall
    Feeling my power and obeying my law
    And as you cry your petty blood and tears
    I hope you remember I will forever be with you, in your fears.
     
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    No one can hear me
    My words flow free
    No one can see me
    As if i'm as transparent as could be

    They pass and push me
    Going on their way
    Not saying a word
    For they have nothing good to say

    You know who you are
    and i've come here to say
    Those hurtful things have ended me
    for I am no longer alive today




     
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    Haikus are hard,
    We sit at the bar,
    I am a nerd at core.
    Refrigerator.
     
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    Dreadcraft is down,
    But life goes on... we all have to work on our social lives.
    I'm a addict, i can't live without,
    We are lost addicts without Dev saving us,
    I hope times go better, <3
     
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    Fuck fuck fuck
    Shit fuck shit shit
    Fuck fuck shit shit fuck
    boobs.
     
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    ARgne, you have a lot of meaning in the poem - I LOVE IT! Especially the ending - it tied everything together and made a perfect sense with a big exclamation mark... nice job!
     
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    That poem left me speechless... Argne surely you were incorporating techniques from the metaphysical movement. Do tell me who your inspiration was.
     
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    Bravo! That is the most extravagant poem I have ever read! You must write more!
     

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